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  1. Line of Best Fit

    Line of Best Fit TPF Noob!

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    After school the other day my best friend let me take some pictures of her. Finally. Here I was just working on things like framing and leading lines, etc. Some C&C would be really helpful!

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    4. - A lot like number three, but I think I like it almost better.
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  2. Line of Best Fit

    Line of Best Fit TPF Noob!

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    Sorry, number 3:

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    Line of Best Fit TPF Noob!

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    Bump, please someone just give me some C&C?
     
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    Artograph TPF Noob!

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    Noob here...but I can tell you what *I* think! :O)

    #1. I see how you were trying to work with the lines, but it almost makes you want to look up into the upper left corner. Not sure, but I think it might work better to crop off the top and to have moved slightly over, enough to see the left frame of each window. Also, her face is too close to the beam....she should be back just a bit!

    #2. ....She has a window growing out of her head! ;O) Trust me, I know sometimes we totally miss stuff like that!! Personally, I'd like to see her sitting to the left of the window, and I'd like to see more roof and bench (to frame it in?).

    Hope that helps a bit??

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    Big Mike I am Big, I am Mike Staff Member Supporting Member

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    I like your framing the subject with lines & objects, but I think the leading lines need work. Try diagonal lines, they usually tend to work better than vertical or horizontal lines, for leading the viewers eye to the subject.
     
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    I love number four. It would be wicked as a black and white :)
     
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    i think she is too small for the frame, unless you were going for loneliness
     

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