Age of innocence?

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  1. neogfx

    neogfx TPF Noob!

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    OK, so 2 questions here.

    1. Which text placement works best?
    2. Which exposure settings work best?

    a.[​IMG] b.[​IMG] c.[​IMG]

    Thanks for the help. :)
     
  2. Ms.ChicagoPhotoShop

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    These are great. i like the wording above her head in c. and i like the exposure best in b. The exposure in b is the most realistic and emotionally dark. Great job.
     
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    I like B
    Great Job
     
  4. chroix

    chroix In Latin it's "spikius conius thingonius"

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    I like C but in all cases I would use a differnet font. Something deconstructed or at least that had more weight to it. Like the contrast of the red with the black and white.
     
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    Thanks for the comments guys.

    Tried using a kid's handwriting for text to try and portray the concept a little better. Any comments greatly welcome.

    Better, Worse?

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    Looks good but crop the top, my eye keeps going up to the light area.
     

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