Discussion in 'Critique Forum Archives' started by Scott WRG Editor, Oct 23, 2004.
any suggestions on how to improve this photo?
Are those model planes??? They look so...perfect and clean. That thing sticking up from the bottom is a bit distracting. And a few of those hotspots in the windows (?) are a bit too hot.
Those are real planes. Its the cleanest hanger I have ever been in. And the thing sticking up in the corner is another plane.
Move most of those planes out of the way so you can photograph them one at a time.
That space looks great...with that huge window.
is this a Russian plane with red star?
This is not an ordinary HANGAR, is it, Scott?
This is more like an airplane showroom, squeaky-clean as it is. And the planes even seem to have little "price-tags" at "their feet"...
There's little you can do about this particular photo to make it any better, I think. You'd have had to move that "nosy" plane out of the way which is "sticking its nose" into your picture.
In this one, I don't even mind the "too hot hotspots", for those just underline the cleanliness of the whole place, windows included. Everythings SHINY.
I quite like the blown highlights, adds a bit of surrealism to it
Yes. It's a WW2 Yakovlev fighter. I can't see much detail but it's either a Yak 3 or a YAK 9
cool...'cause I've lived in Russia for many years...
I totally agree, If the whole floor were illuminated as it is on the far left it would look like the whole set up was on a giant light box... a very cool effect if you ask me.
Yes it is Elrick, and you are correct Ant. It is a Yak 3, one of the new built airframes built by Yakovlev a few years ago.
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