All Wrapped Up

Discussion in 'People Photography' started by Shane, Dec 11, 2007.

  1. Shane

    Shane TPF Noob!

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    This started out as a joke out of boredom. Self timed shot. Sheet as a backdrop blown out. 2 flashes. Critique or comments greatly appreciated!
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    I can not take serious self portraits without looking emotionless or like a tool. I believe this falls under tool. I'm over it though.
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  2. JCleveland

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    i love the "blown out" (i would call it high-key) backround! first photo: "WOW THAT'S RED"
    second: too much torso, not enough head room!!!! okay expression, but his eyes are lacking some emotion. there also seems to be quite a sharp shadow along his collars primarly and under HIS right arm.. perhaps some softer lighting\larger lightsource\reflector could help that out.
    neat. i'd like to see some more of your 'jokes'!
     
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    I think I have that same shirt.. Is it from Gap?

    Great shirt..:thumbup:
     
  4. Shane

    Shane TPF Noob!

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    nah target haha. I love it though.
     

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