Also Week 1 w/ DSLR

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  1. leannw

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    Also my first week with any slr camera in general....keeping that in mind..please feel free to hand out any constructive criticism...I don't get offended easy!!


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    Thanks for loooking!
     
  2. Stormchase

    Stormchase No longer a newbie, moving up!

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    ya chopped off all the heads. even the horse lol. pretty good all and all and would say 1 is my fav. the baby has very cool eyes with the little blue ring. :thumbup:
     
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    What lens are you using with your XSi? I see slight vignetting on every shot.
     
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    HA ha - I actually didn't cut the horses head off intentionally..it was really hard to get pictures of them because they kept walking towards me! But the rest actually were intentional. I was trying to focus on the eyes...and reading the "rule of thirds" it was my understanding to put the eyes in the top third of the picture...maybe I got that wrong.

    I have taken about 400 pictures in the last week and these just happened to be the ones I like the best...not EVERY picture I took is cut off like that though.

    Thank you for looking and commenting..
     
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    that would be my editing....but I am using a canon 28-80mm...

    let me post a picture right off my card and see what you think.
     
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    Nice pics. The only thing that immediately bothered me a bit was that the top of the heads weren't in the frame.
     
  7. leannw

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    Ok...one that actually has the top of her head!! :)

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    yeah i think thats true with the eyes. really i know little about people shots. i learn bits on here not even ' looking for it tho. there are good portrait peeps here too advise.
     
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    I'm just gonna say what everyone else has. The heads are cut off and I think here is too much vignette. The baby is absolutely precious!
     
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    very cute and colorful baby photo.
     

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