Amanda

[leejt1986]

I did a fun photoshoot with my friend Amanda yesterday, here are some of my favorites, comments and critiques please. This is only the second photoshoot I've ever done, so I hope to get better with time

 

[DanFinePhotography]

These are nice, #2 and 4 are slightly overexposed. #1 looks a little busy

 

[leejt1986]

These are nice, #2 and 4 are slightly overexposed. #1 looks a little busy

2 I used a flash on, and I dont have much experience with using a flash.

And what do you mean by busy, the background?

 

[Early]

These are nice, #2 and 4 are slightly overexposed. #1 looks a little busy

2 I used a flash on, and I dont have much experience with using a flash.

And what do you mean by busy, the background?

I think that's what he means, although I don't agree in this case. Sometimes it's nice to show the subject's environment. It tells a little of what they're about.

2. I like the background in the this one. I hope you took more shots of her in that set up, especially without the flash.

3. I'm not crazy about the camera angle. And it's blurry. Don't be afraid to use a tripod.

4. I'd like it if she wasn't so burnt out.

5. Here it would be better if she was to the left a bit more, and the rest of her legs were included. And, as in the 2nd one, another nice setting.

 

[leejt1986]

2. I like the background in the this one. I hope you took more shots of her in that set up, especially without the flash.

2 was done in an antiques/costume shop. The lighting was very random and hard to expose for.

I've learned from this that stores like this are hard to expose for, without being able to adjust available lighting.