Angel face C&C welcome

Discussion in 'The Black & White Gallery' started by KAikens318, May 10, 2010.

  1. KAikens318

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    I like it, but the blur is a bit too much. Back it off a bit so the skin still has some texture in it.
     
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    Way too flat. It's super gray. I agree, the skin looks very waxy and too perfect. I think this would have been way better in color.I do however, like the wet eyelashes, but I would suggest reshooting with a better exposure.
     
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    Here is the color, unedited version.

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    I don't like the background, I think white would've been better.
    She didn't need all the blurring, she's super young, her skin is flawless. I would just fix the skin-tone a bit, the yellow in the corner of her eye is bothering me. I don't like the crop, now that I think about it, it's way too close, but I do like the bubbles. I would have liked to see more of the environment so it plays along.
     
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    That is a he actually. ;) I definitely agree that white would have been better but my backdrops don't hang well in the bathtub. :)
     
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    oh wow!! Well HE looks like a little girl I know. Sorryy how embarassing! Lol.
     
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    Lol, it's all good! He has very long eyelashes just like his dad. :)

    Here is a more 'boyish' picture of him

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    Pose #2 wins hands down.

    Great pose, nice repeating pattern as a background/floor. Could stand to be brightened up a bit and a bit of the reds pulled out of the skin tone, but that's a really nice shot.
     

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