Angeline

Discussion in 'People Photography' started by clarbin, Aug 7, 2008.

  1. clarbin

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    This is my niece with a case of the chills after swimming.

    Comments are welcome.

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    The composition leaves a bit to be desired. There's not enough negative/background space to give her context and too much to have the subject isolated.

    You could bring the shadows up a bit on the subject, especially in the eyes and make her, not the towel, the focal point.

    Pic is really sharp and decent DOF though.
     

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