Angry Red Houses (C&C appreciated)

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  1. Scott7117

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    Just a few shots of creepy abandoned building my friend showed me. I didn't have any film for my Pentax K1000, so I had to use my lousy P&S but I think they came out pretty good. As always C&C please.

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    The interior shot's were pretty lousy, so I'm not even going to bother posting them.

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    1) The angle is kind of lousy and thus makes it kind of uninteresting.

    2) Nice angle. It could stand to have a boost in contrast though to take out so many of the midtones. Also, since there isn't really a subject, maybe try filling the frame with the texture or whatever you were trying to get across.

    3) Kind of boring. I kind of watn to see the chair in it's entirety in it's setting, if that makes sense.

    Overall, they aren't bad. They could just use some better composition. Just keep shooting. :)
     
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    As an "uban explorer" I'd LOVE to see the inside of it. :hail:

    For the ext. ones, typical shots I see a lot. Not bad, but like said the angles could be different. The composition is decent enough and the reso is, too. Find some cool details of the outside and get closeups. And I'd love to see what you took inside.
     

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