Another attempt to rescue a single shoot from a horrible shoot

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  1. fotogenik

    fotogenik TPF Noob!

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    Here is another attempt to rescue a single shot from a shoot gone horribly wrong.

    C&C most welcome.

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    Or this maybe:

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    Alison Swiss Army Friend Supporting Member

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    All I see are Red x's. Sorry!
     
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    ok edited the url to where I was hosting them, apparently webshots doesn't work so good.

    Thanks,
     
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    Christie Photo No longer a newbie, moving up!

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    Aside from being broad lit, I'm having a bunch of trouble with the "snotty" expression. It's really a stopper for me. It makes me recoil a bit.

    The rest of the compsition isn't far off... lighting ratio is good, pose is OK, and I can even live with the clothing. I just wish she had a different expression.

    Nice go, though!

    Pete
     
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    exactly my first impression.
     
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    I was thinking a little closer to constipation. Her expression is just screaming "man I need to pinch one off!"

    Other than the expression, I like. I agree with the lighting and compression comments as well!
     
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    I'm going to have to agree... I like the lighting and pose, but her facial expression leaves a lot to be desired.
     
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    no need to take it there :confused:
     
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    Could you post a different pose/look perhaps. Sometimes when I think something is horribly bad, someone usually finds a way to tweak it back to life. Although the lighting is alright here, and it's a good clear shot, the pose is killing that.
    Pop another one up there, and maybe someone can help.
     
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    THanks a lot for the critques. I basically let this girl do her own poses and so far "constipation" seems to be a running theme. She even sed the same thing when I sent her a pic from the shoot (although not this one).

    I appreciate very much the comments and am feeling better since having another shoot with another girl and the pics have come out much better. I can't post them yet due to some issues with public pictures that she is having right now but I will be posting a few in the future once the issue is cleared up.

    Thanks everyone.
     

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