Another Attempt

Discussion in 'General Gallery' started by Holly, May 12, 2006.

  1. Holly

    Holly TPF Noob!

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    CC WELCOME! I have been TRYING to get a good picture.. Portraits to be exact... I did this one yesterday.. He was NOT looking at me so it was better knowing I was using a flash...

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    Hmm, this does nothing for me in colour. I kind of feel like leaving the thread like lots of people have done. Try converting it to black and white. It doesn't help that he is looking away either.
     
  3. Cuervo79

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    its a little over exposed, and you have to start looking for composition in your photos, not only take the photo technicaly ok but also the theme of it, I kind of like the fact that the child is looking away but he looks too pale because of the direct flash, try getting a sheet of paper in front of it, the more translucid the better, that way you will soften the flash´s power...
     
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    What is it you're not happy about in this shot Holly?

    Composition wise try shooting from lower down, slightly looking under the chin. This may create a more interesting angle.
     
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