Another B&W

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  1. JMLPictures

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    I traveled back to Spokane WA from AZ for the 4th of July. I went over to CDA Idaho to do a shoot with a friend. Here is one from that shoot.

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    Lets here it? Good Bad? What do you like? What do you not like? THanks in advance!

    Josh
     
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    Love the model, pose, light, setting and PP. Don't really love the crop - she's kind of smack in the center of the frame.
     
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    subscuck No longer a newbie, moving up!

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    Agree ^. You can lose all that empty space below her feet and still have plenty of background left.
     
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    I attempted the crop with the foreground cropped out and i didn't like it nearly as much. I know the rule of thirds but in this case I think it looks much better with it there.

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    I really enjoy the negative space. I think it balances out the large amount of black from the dress, but still keeps her as the focus. I'm not usually a fan of such centered poses, but there's a certain symmetry to the entire shot that I can't help but enjoy.
     
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    That is really a nice poss and even the place but I would like to say that there is something that is really missing. From the quality point of view it is no dough fantastic. but I feel some lacking in it.
     

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