Another B&W

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  1. aedemirci

    aedemirci TPF Noob!

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    Hi,

    Another BW of a 100 year old, renovated house. Clouds were added later. Hope you like it..


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  2. Steel26

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    It is a bit dark for my taste. And Im not really liking how the roofline gets lost in the clouds. I like the image as a whole. But it could be a bit better.
     
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    I think it'd be better if the house blended with the clouds better. Looks to fake for me. =/
     
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    I think it looks kind of fake too but that's why I like it.. it's surreal, kind of like a dream world. Great jOB.
     
  5. aedemirci

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    Thank you all for the comments. Small digital enhancements are OK. But I actually don't like adding something to the photo that has never existed while shooting.

    But I had to take this shot and the sky was milky white :wink: I know it does not look so real. You are right. Thanks again..
     
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    yes, I agree with Steel26: I don't like the way the far left corner of the roofline disappears.
    but, the darkness of it is fine by me.
     
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    wow, so strong and rich...i love it! i think i would however crop off some of they sky for a more balance comp
     

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