Another 'couples' fall shoot

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  1. guitarmy

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    Here are a few shots I liked. Crit is always appreciated.

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    and 4 for fun:
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    looks good, good, balanced flash exposure.
     
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    Beautiful sky, nice lighting in the first one! Wow!

    I love the idea of #4, but the bright background gives it a strange lack of depth. What's the brightness between them?

    The perspective of the dock and the flying geese make me think of "journey" when I look at #2. Nice idea. :)

    Marian
     
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    I put a flash on a stand in the bushes, haha.
     
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    lol...they kind of look like amputees in the 4th. But, still a fun shot. I agree with Wildmaven about the flash in that one as well. It doesn't work for me.

    The others are really nice as well. I think I like #2 the best. Were those birds flying in that one or did you add it in from another frame? Either way it looks great:) It has a really nice composition. I think #3 might look really nice if you brightened it up just a tad.
    #1 is gorgeous, but I also think the lower portion could use some brightening up.
     
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    I think your lighting is superb in all of these. Really enjoy your style.
     
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    Thanks! And crit noted. And the birds were actually just timed, not added. We heard them taking off so I just told them to sit still and waited til they were in-frame.
     
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    Beautiful light and camera work on these. I love the idea of putting the light in the bushes on the 4th frame.

    Love & Bass
     
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    Love the first 3, the 4th is a fun shot, as mentioned though, kind of makes him look like an amputee.
     
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    Other than the things already mentioned, nice balance with ambiant/flash. Good comp.
    Nice work.
     
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    i think 1 and 2 are gorgeous. its nice to have good-looking ppl to photograph as well. i agree with the crits on 3 and 4, but overall nice work.
     
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    Thanks yo! And yeah, agreed about 3 & 4.
     

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