Another day in CA (C&C please!)

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  1. MarkV1184

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    I was on vacation back home in CA and decided to head to the Huntington Library for a little photo shoot. Later that day I came home and took some pics of my dogs. C&C PLEASE!!

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    #4 is a pretty good shot, I think that shot would look better with a vignette rather than the 5th picture which it doesn't really fit well with in my opinion.
     
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    #5 is so cute. lol. I thing #1, #2 and #3 to an extent suffers from over exposure from the harsh sunlight. In #2 it could have been better composed with less of the other photographer an more of the bridge imho. Overall nice shots.
     
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    Thanks for the comments! Unfortunately the lighting was incredibly harsh the day we went out to shoot. I should have knocked the exposure down a bit, but for some reason it never came to mind at the time (it was easier to complain).
     
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    More C&C please!
     
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    Kabayan :) i've read somewhere in this forum that we're kababayan :)

    I love #4 & #5... really cute :)

    Ingat :)
     
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    #4 & #5 - the bokeh helped in emphasizing the cute doggies :)
    in #4, you getting down to the dog's eye level makes it special.. u were able to capture the eyes' expression, kahit na sideview.

    #5, well, it's just plain cute with the yawning :)
     
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    More C&C Please!
     
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    Your composition seems really good in all the pictures and the dog in 4 is just too darn cute! Thats my favorite, along with 3.

    1 and 2 are a little over exposed but I'm sure this could be fixed somewhat in photoshop. The DOF is really good in 2 as well but I cant help but think it would have been better the other way around, with the photographer in focus and the background blurred (but thats probably just me!)
     

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