Another from same shoot, again NSFW!

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  1. JaimeGibb

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    Throwing this up too. Once they are all edited I will probably do a thread with 4 or 5, but for now I'd love some immediate feedback. Thanks again everyone!!

    PS: This girl wanted some 'sexy' shots for her husband for Christmas...in case you were wondering :)

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    nice! simple and effective.
     
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    Thanks raider!
     
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    The model, the pose, and otherwise the shot itself is A++, but I think it has too much PP. This is another one of which I would have liked to see the original.
     
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    The oly think I did was smooth out her skin and crop it. I was thinking it might be too much, but thought it looked nice soft.
     
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    Yeah, that does seem to be the consensus.:(

    Oh, well! I tried!:D
     
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    Overall, it's pretty good but I see a few things I might change.
    Firstly is her feet. Unless you have a foot fetish, I don't think that you want to see the bottom of someone's feet. I'm not necessarily sure if it would look better if her feet were flat...but maybe adding some sexy shoes would help.

    I think that her right hand, on top of the ball, is in an awkward position. Also, her right arm is a bit awkward as well. Her forearm looks like cleavage, which looks a bit confusing at first glance.

    Lastly, her hair is blending in with the background. This isn't terrible but I think it would help to have a hair/accent light on that side of here as well.
     
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    THANKS big mike! For real this time :) haha

    Yea I wish I had a hair light on her head.
     
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    I like it, the only thing I can see is that I can distinguish the 4 lights in the balls. But yeah, excellent
     
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    i thought the exact same thing about the feet :wink:

    good work non the less!!
     
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    Very nice shot.

    I do agree about the feet, if she wasn't pointing them upward it would be much better.

    Garrett
     
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    I like it! Doesn't seem over-processed to me.. I don't think there's anything wrong with the bottom of the feet (and I don't have a foot fetish)..

    I actually really like the positioning - her hand on top of the ball looks very natural and playful. Cute shot.

    Was she happy with it?
     

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