Another Maternity Shoot c/c needed

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  1. ababysean

    ababysean TPF Noob!

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    I would love some cc on these before I show them to her.

    Thanks so much!

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    They look great, but a little grainy... probably from compression?

    Not real fond of the cut off elbow in the last one. Wishin it was a real smile in the first one, but overall I think these are really good!
     
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    Yeah, the elbow kind of bothers me a little too. But I like the tighter crop.
     
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    I dont like how your looking down on her in all 3. I think she'll be happy as far as quality and all but maybe a side shot from her level or something, stressing on the belly.
     
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    She is really self conscious about her non existent double chin...

    She told me like 5 bazillion times she doesn't want her double chin to show! lol
     
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    :lmao:
     
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    #1 - Vertigo

    #2 - I really like the lines and curves you captured. Damn shame somebody didn't think to powerwash the railings.

    #3 - Not so much. The crop isn't too pleasing.

    The main issue I see with #2 & #3 are you have neither a 2/3 face nor a profile. Both eyes are in view but the nose breaks the opposite cheek line. Either have her slightly turn her chin towards the camera or further away to get a profile.
     
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    This is in a public area.... so yea, the city probably doesnt power wash it too often!
     
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    I LIKE the unwashed rails.
     
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    Ooh. I like that one.

    I wish it was more... pastel? Not such bold colors?

    Very nice.
     
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