Another night outside

[Harpper]

I like the third one. It's maybe slightly too saturated now and the other guy may be right about the focal point.

You might try doing just a little less increase in saturation. This also comes down to what different monitors are showing also. [/u]

It looks like you posted while I was typing. Thanks for the input. I'll try a little less saturation maybe tomorrow or later tonight. I've worked on this picture too long.

 

[Harpper]

This also comes down to what different monitors are showing also.

That could be part of the problem. Perfecting this might be a little hard unless I actually see how it looks on your monitor. I did give it another shot but this time I also started from scratch like you did on yours. I kind of went the opposite direction on this one but it was based on your suggestions. I think it was mainly the color because I think the brownish hue was what was making it less intense. Brown kind of does that unless it's brighten up. The second one seems not as dull to me but I don't know if it's better. If you want it more intense then I would have to either brighten up the lighting or drastically change the color. The other options didn't seem to work.

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