Another old tractor photo - C&C much appreciated

Discussion in 'Landscape & Cityscape' started by Jon_Are, Apr 30, 2009.

  1. Jon_Are

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    Thanks!

    Jon

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    Cool. Well composed... except for that tree growing out of the tractor. I wouldn't be surprised at a tree growing out of an old abandoned bit of machinery, except I'm pretty sure it's just the composition in this case. :p

    I like the rich, saturated colors. It really brings out the rust and textures of the tractor.

    I do feel like there is a lot of empty space in the top right. There's just nothing there to see, and my eye ends to be lost in the emptiness. Perhaps you could either come in closer (to get more details on the tractor), or recompose to include the barn a bit more.
     
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    I would actually isolate the tractor (ie. remove the old barn). I would take some separate snaps of the barn. I love old barn photos. The colors are good though.
     

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