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  1. ktanady

    ktanady TPF Noob!

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    Another one from me, a picture taken @Ancol Beach, North Jakarta, Indonesia
    I had it processed in two different style..

    C&Cs are highly appreciated, be cruel if you want to..;)

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  2. Polyphony

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    I like the second edit. Third image. How did you get that effect?
     
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    tirediron Watch the Birdy! Staff Member Supporting Member

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    C&C per req:

    I much prefer the original image. Both the other two are far too dark and over-processed for my taste. This has a lot of potential, and you've got some excellent lints in the curve of the boardwalk, but it would be better if you could see just a little more of it, that is if the image went a little farther right.

    This image really needed a G-ND to enhance the cloud detail and brighten up the overall exposure, the foreground is probably 1 1/2 stops under right now, and don't forget to level in post.

    Just my $00.02 worth - your mileage may vary.

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  4. ktanady

    ktanady TPF Noob!

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    well..the processed pictures are both in HDR..
     
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    ktanady TPF Noob!

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    Okay, maybe simpler is better, lol..
    Actually I tried to add more of the broadwalk into the picture, the problem is that there're people hanging out over there..so this is as much as I could take as not to include those people..

    and yeah, I'll be looking for the ND filter, thank you very much for the C&C sir, appreciate it..:)
     
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    Derrel Mr. Rain Cloud

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    The second and third versions are much more dramatic. An amazing difference between them and the first shot. The second photo, with the cool blue tones, looks almost believable, as if a storm were rolling in. The last shot looks a bit theatrical,and over-worked, but still it's better than the original in terms of visual appeal and impact. Good job.
     
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    great edits! love them both
     
  8. Robin Usagani

    Robin Usagani Been spending a lot of time on here!

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    Bagus euy!!!
     
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    SrBiscuit TPF Noob!

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    fo reals? or just tonemapping?

    i like the second one.
     
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    lordfly TPF Noob!

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    Wow, that's amazing.
     
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    mrshaleyberg TPF Noob!

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    I'm guessing this is HDR? Looks like it. I LOVE IT. I just need to figure out how to do it myself! lol
     
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    i enjoy #3
     

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