Another Pier Perspective

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  1. Miaow

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    2 second exposure down the beach yesterday under the pier :)

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    Very nice! Only thing i would have changed perhaps would be the angle, I think maybe a lower angle could look more pleasing, maybe its just me. But i like it, good work
     
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    Amazing shot, i do agree w/ the angle but i think it is still beautiful!
     
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    Thanks IanRB & The Empress :)

    I'll try and get a lower shot of it next time I'm down there - or do you mean actually just more angling the shot down a bit so the opening at the end is higher in the frame?

    I was sorta up on a high bit of sand a bit before where the waves were washing in (was high tide and pretty rough) - To get down much lower on the whole shot (without digging the tripod into the sand) would have meant getting a bit too close to where the waves were for my liking lol
     
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    Oh wow...

    I know you're looking for ways to get better, but from my inexperienced viewpoint, I don't think it could get much better. Maybe, but there's absolutely nothing wrong with how you did it this way.

    Very cool, and very interesting. Where was this at? Not that I would know, I've never even been to the beach or ocean before :(
     
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    Lovely shot. I really like all the mist going on here.
     
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    Thanks Senor hound & ShootHoops :)

    Senor Hound, It's taken at a local beach sorta closeish to where I am. Unless you've been to Melbourne, Australia you probably would never have heard of the place (Dromana).
     
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    I like the grain and the window towards the end of the pier/ top of the shot.
     
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    Thanks:)
     
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    that's pretty darn good, I like the subject and general comp a lot...a little more detail in the shadows and some perspective correction would make a difference too.
     
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    Thanks Roger :)
     

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