another portrait C&C please:)

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  1. jamescell

    jamescell TPF Noob!

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    here I go playing with my strobes again. Let me know what you think please. I used 2 Vivtar 285hv strobes , main light camera left through a shoot through white umbrella on 1/2 power. background light directly behind subject with a neon blue rosco gel on 1/4 power


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    I like it but its abit dark on the underside of her face.
    Also the background light is hardly visible, on my monitor anyway. As it is itsa bit distracting because you can only see it a little bit. Either have it really bright or not at all.
     
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    The only thing I would change would be to light up her face a little bit more. I don't find the background at all distracting.
     
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    Thanks guys. I think I had the light a bit high, next time I will lower it a bit and see what happens :scratch:
     
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    I like it!! I do agree though about the bottom half of her face not lit up. I think a reflector in front and below her would've been a nice touch!! Awesome pose though!!
     
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    I love her expression. Great subject :]
     

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