..:: Another Portrait of my sister ::..

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  1. Mersad

    Mersad TPF Noob!

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    This was shot at the beach. We were sitting in a cafe when i took this photo. Behind her are tree branches from the trees on the coast.

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    Nicely done. I'd consider maybe cropping some of the right side off so she's not quite so centred. You're lucky to have such an attractive model!
     
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    Thank you. Yes, i should crop it somewhat.
     
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    beautifull picture, but it would be even better if she wasent centered
     
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    maybe try to lose the sunglasses next time it kinda takes the focus off of her.
     
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    Nice. I like it.
     
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    I think it adds to the shot. It's something different.
     
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    LaFoto Just Corinna in real life Staff Member Supporting Member

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    Well, the huge sunglasses make me look at the reflection only trying to locate YOU and the scene behind you (tables, table cloths etc) ... so if you meant to show us a portrait of your sister, it would definitely have been better without the sunglasses. They are distracting. Different they may be, too, but distracting, as well.
     
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    Of course, I agree with you. But this was not a shoot, more a snap shot i took.
     

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