another senior portrait

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  1. lisa_13

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    here's another from the same session as my last post. any more comments?

    seems like she is extremely pale here. not sure why, but the print is a lot more saturated.

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    Did you try adjusting the levels or highlights? I agree, this looks very pale. Although, this is a really nice shot. I love the framing and it seems to be pretty in focus.
     
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    I like this one a lot! Skin looks good and nice clear background. I'd probably brighten up the teeth just a tad and like stated above try bumping up the contrast.
     
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    I like this shot. Not that the first one was bad, it's just this one is much more natural. The print is probably more saturated because the technician used auto adjustments. If I'm going for a particular look, I ask for no adjustments to be made to an exposure.
     
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    Great composition, i think a slight curves adjustment might have improved the tones
     
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    thanks for the input everyone
     
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    That came out nice. I love how soft it is, and nice cropping. :)
     

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