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  1. messier

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    What is it?
    Also, there is the shadow of the lense in the bottom of the frame(from the flash)
     
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    A drinking fountain?

    It's not too clear what I'm looking at, and could do with a bit more contrast IMO.
     
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    drinking fountain
     
  5. MDowdey

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    i think the intention is good and the black and white could use some more contrast as someone already said. also just another suggestion, if you are going to be shooting film mainly(which is what we have seen so far) then i would try and invest in a scanner that will blow the viewers away. 35mm prints are so vibrant and low to mid grade scanners usually take most of that pop away.


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  6. JonMikal

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    bet you'd like it better if ya bumped the levels and removed the dark shadow on the bottom.
     

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