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  1. divided

    divided TPF Noob!

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    Any feedback on this shot? I havent done any PP, this is straight from the camera.

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    For me, having the focus on the subject on the far right doesn't really work here, because my eyes are distracted and drawn away from it by the red flowers.

    Personally I'd either adjust the composition, or use a shallower depth of field to reduce the distractions.

    Also it looks a little flat colour wise, maybe play around with the curves and contrast.

    All just my opinion tho :D
     
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    its cute, I think maybe if you moved your position to infront of the ornament and had the flowers directly behind it with a shwllow depth of field the back gorund colours may give it some more pop
     
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    Appreciate the feedback. I was thinking the same thing about the flowers drawing the eye away.
     

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