are my portraits improving???

Discussion in 'Photography Beginners' Forum' started by flashgordio, May 20, 2010.

  1. flashgordio

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    I really like this!! Great job!
     
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    I really like the pose in #1, its a bit too grayish can you lighten it up more? Also notice the bottom left corner where the backdrop did not reach, easy fix on that one though.

    #2 I think can use a bit more contrast, IMHO, good shots for a beginner though keep shooting :thumbup:
     
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    still trying to get to grips with strobes...1 and 2 are off a couple of months ago.
    heres one from weeks ago.[​IMG]
     
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    none of the photos have been edited yet as i thought i would get more c&c this way.
    ive posted a few times but not had much response...not in clique yet......
     

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