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  1. Jaszek

    Jaszek No longer a newbie, moving up!

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    First three for C&C and the last two CC If you want. Shot in Raw edited in Lightroom. EXIF is there.

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  2. Jaszek

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    bump
     
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    Jaszek No longer a newbie, moving up!

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    nobody? seriously?
     
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    bump before I go to work
     
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    Jaszek No longer a newbie, moving up!

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    35 Views and nothing?
     
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    I like #3 and #5 . #1 the coat is so dark its hard to distinguish the person from the background and Im not positive but #2 looks a bit crooked but I like the feel of the hustle and bustle in that one.
     
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    5 is my favorite, but 3 gave me a good laugh.

    How close were you to the squirrel? They are usually just jumping and running around everywhere.:p

    3 reminded me of drug deals in movie. People looking around making sure there is no heat on them, then exchanging :lol:
     
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    I like 1-3. Nice work.
     
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    I really liked #5 the squirel with the shallow depth of field also #3 gets me thinking what are the 2 men doing. I just dont like the white space on the left maybe more of the grafitti on the right would of beeb better.
     
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    I like 1), but the car in the background is distracting, and makes it look slightly snapshotty. Slightly shallower depth of field might help, too.
    5) is great, the eyes are nicely in focus, but it would have been nice if you could have stopped down just enough to get the whiskers sharp. I'd recrop it, to place the squirrel off centre. I think a square crop could work nicely.
     
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    ON my monitor I can distinguish the coat perfectly from the back ground. It must be your monitor

    I know the secret squirrel call lol...no seriously, you have to go squirrel shooting with me one day to learn it. lol.
    I can see the detail of the wall, check your monitor settings. I liked this crop more because it shows what the other guy is lookig at, if they were on the left he would be looking off the frame.
    for ! the aperture was 2.8 so couldn't open it more.
     
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    I like #1-3 a lot. The contrast in #2 is great, and I like the small car parked in front of the big truck in the foreground, it looks really cool.

    I like #5 too, it's cool how the squirrel is just hanging out between the bars in that fence or whatever.
     

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