At the ballpark, feedback welcome

Discussion in 'The Black & White Gallery' started by skid2964, Jun 6, 2008.

  1. skid2964

    skid2964 TPF Noob!

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    I took this last night at my daughter's softball game.

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  2. usayit

    usayit No longer a newbie, moving up!

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    I like it....

    At first I was going to say that it is underexposed but for this photograph it actually works in its favor. I wonder if seeing your daughter's face would define more emotion in the subject.

    The only other thing that comes to mind is your signature. It is Much brighter from a low-key photograph which brings unnecessary attention to it.
     
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    As you can see I took your advice and toned down the signiture.

    Thank you very much for your comments.

     
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    I like it!
     

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