At the beach

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  1. danir

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    Thanks for looking.
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    A different beach scene.
    They seem a little dark, but im sure thats the feeling you were going for,
    and it works.
    It bugs me a bit that he is missing a water wing.. but thats a nit pick.

    =)
     
  3. danir

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    Thanks for the comment Christina.

    Dani.
     
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    Yeah I like the 2nd one a lot..although if the kid didn't have the swimmie on I think it'd be even better
     
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    Dani, it is the composition of the 2nd shot that really makes it unique. The placement of the people, especially with the child to the far left and the body language of the child and the adult, plus you add in the beach ball caught in mid flight whch seems to be blocking the sun- these are the elements that drive this shot.

    If I were you, I would play around with it even more and try to darken the foreground more while lighting up the sky a bit. Maybe even convert it to B&W?

    Nice shot
     
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    Thanks for commenting.

    Rick, I'll try playing some more with this one and also the B&W and see if can get something I like better.

    Dani
     

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