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Discussion in 'General Gallery' started by I Like It Sideways, Jun 7, 2007.

  1. I Like It Sideways

    I Like It Sideways TPF Noob!

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    Lots of PP to get it where it is, but I'm not sure if its done... Any suggestions as to what else I can do with it? Does the lens flare make or break the image? or neither?

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    umm, not feeling it. Sorry. too much pp, looks sloppy. and the lens flare is just a lens flare.
     
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    This doesn't help me improve, what would you do different?

    The horizon is a bit sloppy, I know. As I said, I don't think it's done

    You and I have different tastes in PP :)
     
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    I like it...because it's not something I would shoot. I like the lens flare.
    however the front of the car seams to be a bit off. ?
    it grabs my eye 2 much...
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    I don't know if it's appropriate to say that this one is over-photoshopped. It's so heavily stylized that it's going well beyond the reaches of simple photo-editing and moving into photo-art territory. That Miata actually looks like it was painted, which is a neat effect.

    It's not my personal style either, but it's an interesting piece. My only real suggestion would be to try and stylize the car's surroundings so the edit work looks a little more cohesive. The car stands out too much at this point and looks unnatural in its settings, despite the overall unnatural look (which I presume was a goal).
     
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    I like the image for what it is.. I can see it easily in a magazine shoot. Nice job.
     

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