At the park C&C please..

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  1. Mcleod

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    Here are some pics I took of my girls at the park the other day, I only did a small amount of
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    Are these too amatuar for comments? I would love help to improve, anyone? What should I be posting to get C&C. Less picures? More interesting subject?
     
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    color looks good. they look like normal pics to me though. i dont see anything that makes me go "whoa"
     
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    number 2 has some cool negative space :)
     
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    when taking portraits, simple is good... Use a wide aperture and zoom right in to get a shallow depth of field. Try not to use the on camera flash unless you have to, most of the time natural light will look much better.
     
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    #1, #6 are my favorites. DOF, composition, exposure etc...
     
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    Thank you for the advice, I guess to anyone else these are just snapshots. I'll try to be more interesting in future.Oh and I only used flash on 1 and 2.
     
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    #1 & #6 are my favorites. Number 1 if funny, as it looks like it's not straight, as the "castle" is leaning, but if it was straight, then the girl may look like she's leaning. You may need to adjust somewhat and see what works. I like her eyes in #6. The others do seem more like snapshots, but you've got a good start. Keep it up.
     

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