At the park

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  1. electricblue

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    Taken at our local park.



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    I like number 2, she looks moody and the light and shade help put that accross
     
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    thank you rachelsne. I like the second one as well. Any other creative crit?
     
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    I think the girl in #2 looks sad and lonely. Though sometimes with our captures we get the wrong mood. Was she sad?
     
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    second picture! just alone... captured well!
     
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    she was sad, her little friend had run off to play with someone else. she looked so alone in a park full of kids on a sunny day. Thanks for the comments
     
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    very nicely done, these shots show the vulnerability and energy of kids....good choice b&w too. The second shot looks straight out of the 60's!
     
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    #2 is the best of this group, IMO #1 the composition is wrong, I like to see at less part of subject’s face
     
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    Roger----Thanks. I wondered if b&w was a good choice...glad I went with it.
    Jeff----I was unsure about number 1 myself. I liked the angle but was unsure since it was a back shot.
     
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    #2 great capture!
     

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