At The Park

Discussion in 'People Photography' started by MikeEasonPhotography, Feb 18, 2010.

  1. MikeEasonPhotography

    MikeEasonPhotography TPF Noob!

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    Did no editing but looks like i photoshopped him in the picture

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    bigtwinky No longer a newbie, moving up!

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    Not really a good photograph. Cute snapshot to remember the day at the park though. The focus seems on.

    He is too center composed, there is a bit too much head space on top of him, would of been more interesting for the viewer (me) if he actually was looking at the camera, or even if you had moved slightly to your left and we could see more of his other eye and then had his head on the right side of the frame.

    I dont like how he has trees coming out of the top of his head, would of been nicer if the sky was the main backdrop. I also dont like the motion/blur in his hands. It adds some distraction to the image.

    Did you use your popup flash?
     
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    yeah was just screwin around i just liked how the flash made him look
     
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    Please indicate in your post when you are just screwing around instead of trying to make a photograph. That may help guide the CC a bit more.
     

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