I did another model shoot yesterday, but this time instead of my normal headshots, typical model book stuff, I tried for more of a commercial fashion feel. I am posting too many for the critique forum (and have also posted this in the People forum), but I am looking for suggestions and critique on the whether or not the following have a "commercial" feel. The model is "Kristen": 1. 2. 3. 4. 5. 6. 7. 8. 9. Thank you for looking and all suggestions are greatly appreciated!