Aurora

[Milky]

Studio shooting with 5D3 and 50/1.2-85/1.8, using godox QT-400 and some color filters

1

2

3

4

5

6

 

[FITBMX]

Overall I like the set very much!
#3 and #4 need a little more light on the background, her sweater is disappearing into it.
#2 and #3 her hair needs some work, once you have her in the pose brush her hair to give it a clean separation between between the front and back of her shoulder. So all of the loose hairs are brushed back into the rest, for a cleaner look. The flyaway hairs in all of these photos need to be cleaned up in post.
#4 and #5 are my favorites of the set, but #5 has a single hair over her right (Camera left) eye, that looks like a scratch on the photo, I would clone it out.
Take this C&C with a grain of salt, I'm not a pro.

 

[Milky]

Thanks (sorry for late answer).
Maybe a bit of backlight or side light would help to give a bit more disappearing effect, but I am not sure if I would find it better.
Make sense for the hair brushing, I think I will make sure to have a brush on the next shooting.
Make sense for #5 too, will have a look at this once I have time.

 

[Jeff15]

very nice set but number one and six for me.....

 

[Donde]

All are well done with interesting color effects but I especially like her engagement with us in the first.