Derrel
Mr. Rain Cloud
- Joined
- Jul 23, 2009
- Messages
- 48,225
- Reaction score
- 18,939
- Location
- USA
- Website
- www.pbase.com
- Can others edit my Photos
- Photos OK to edit
I thought shot #1 was the best of all, from a technical and aesthetic perspective. Next-best was shot #10, which had some creative techniques applied that looked intentional,and even though those small orange flags are distracting, shot 10 was somewhat interesting to look at.
The other images had post processing that simply did not work for me--the whites were odd-looking, and your shadow values were very elevated, which is a look I do not like.
Your lenswork is a bit off as well. Angle of view, focal length selection, forced apparent perspective distortion....just not very enjoyable to look at. None of the shots really made me want to own the car, or feel envious of the guy who owns the car--and isn't that really the goal of car shots?
The other images had post processing that simply did not work for me--the whites were odd-looking, and your shadow values were very elevated, which is a look I do not like.
Your lenswork is a bit off as well. Angle of view, focal length selection, forced apparent perspective distortion....just not very enjoyable to look at. None of the shots really made me want to own the car, or feel envious of the guy who owns the car--and isn't that really the goal of car shots?