AWACs Air to Air looking for critique

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  1. JerBoyd

    JerBoyd TPF Noob!

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    Here is another E-3 AWACs shot I have been working on. I have spent about an hour working the image.

    I would love to know what you think? Where I can improve and what can make it better?

    Do you think there is too much PP?

    There has been some heavy editing as you can see. I actually had to copy an engine from another image and post it in this one.

    Thanks
    Jeremy
    www.boyd.zenfolio.com

    Original -- link to larger photo
    http://Boyd.zenfolio.com/p153029843/?photo=161220845

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    http://Boyd.zenfolio.com/p153029843/?photo=486433498

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  2. LaFoto

    LaFoto Just Corinna in real life Staff Member Supporting Member

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    Impressive, as all your air-to-air photos.
    The second is a bit on the dark side ... while I really like the outlines of the AWACS plane by the light of the setting sun, I miss the detail on the cockpit part. But cloning out the "framing" as it got into your pic by the opening (?) went well! I like that.
     
  3. JerBoyd

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    Here is another go at it. I did some work on the nose to lighten just a bit. The I added some detail to the engines.

    Let me know what you think.

    Jeremy
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  4. lostprophet

    lostprophet No longer a newbie, moving up!

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    I like it ( no surprise there )
     

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