awww nuts.

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  1. captain-spanky

    captain-spanky TPF Noob!

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    My very first picture with my brand new fisheye/macro jobbidoo
    can't help but think the DoF was a little narrow?
    Managed to get the light just how i wanted though.. was quite pleased with myself as they were in a really sunny room and it was a little too bright for my liking.. :)
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    Terriff!! composition and lighting. I don't have a problem with the DoF being too narrow, just slighting misplaced. (the main subject nut has a blurry spot that is distracting. if that spot was in focus and a little bit behind it wasn't I'd think it was perfect)

    I'm assuming you can reshoot this at your leisure? Unless someone gets hungry that is..
     
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    lol... I'd have to buy some more nuts... they were all eaten in the process of shooting :D
     
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    YOU ATE MONA LISA!
     
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    awesome shot! the lighting really makes the shot for me :thumbsup:
     
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    Agreed; this is nice, Captain! :D
     
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    mentos_007 The Freshmaker!

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    wow I't great!
     
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    Awesome DOF, awesome color. :)
     
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    very nice - the DOF works just fine for me - as did everything else
     
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    The lightining is brilliant (no pun intended) I love the way the shadows play over the nuts. Great picture.
     
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    The "nuts" text seems really distracting to me. Other than that; the light gives a nice shape to the frame. Is the nut a fruit or a vegetable?
     
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    The lighting is awesome, The DOF is a slight issue if you wanted to change that I would suggest f/11 and a tripod. Great job though.
     

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