B & W Contempo Senior Girl

Discussion in 'The Professional Gallery' started by Tally Ho, Jul 16, 2005.

  1. Tally Ho

    Tally Ho TPF Noob!

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    Last one for awhile, don't want to hog the forum. Another one mom was unsure of but the girl loved it. Exposure info same as before, but image changed from a color image to b & w in Photoshop.

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  2. Alison

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    I can see why the girl would love it and Mom might not. The black and white is nice and her placement behind the fence was well done so you can clearly see her eyes. Her expression though....something about her look seems off with this setting. Perhaps it her clothing as well, a very preppy looking sweater just doen't match the setting in my opinion.
     
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    Like your b&w conversion.

    Her most arresting feature (IMO) is her eyes. I would have given more prominence to the eyes. The positioning of the hands/fingers IMO are distracting. I would have also liked it more if she was wearing something black/grey.



    Please post at your will. I do not think anyone is concerned about the post count :). Each and every photo and the comments followed (be it from a beginner or a veteran) is a learning experience.
     

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