b&w for critiquing

Discussion in 'General Gallery' started by vonnagy, Apr 3, 2004.

  1. vonnagy

    vonnagy have kiwi, will travel...

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    I was having a very hard time with the colour on these, so i greyscaled them (for the time being). Any comments, critiques or suggestions welcome:

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  2. mrsid99

    mrsid99 TPF Supporters Supporting Member

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    Knowing how much I like B&W I suppose "stick them in your ear" is not what you're looking for?
     
  3. Tuna

    Tuna Supermodel

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    I like the third one best. Nice prespective and shadows.

    The first two are a little too busy for me. Maybe if you focused in/cropped in on part of the scene.

    I'm seeing different tones on your pictures - did you intend this?
     
  4. anua

    anua TPF Noob!

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    :D mark, mark, you knew i would like them, dont you? :) :)

    the stairs pic is my favorite, but there's something that overweights(? :roll: ) a composition at the right side too much for me..i dont know yet ..maybe more ligt at the bottom steps, maybe more contrast at the left side...? anyway, i like this one a lot! and its mood.

    #1 and#2...i like them too. :) and i won't KEEP OFF!!!!! :D :D :spiderma:

    ...the only thing i m thinking about is - that maybe more light (or contrast?) at these two boards(?)(at the left) would make the pics more readable? ha?
    i dont know, i have to think it over...i dont know PS posibilities yet :(
    anyway, i like a kind of "story" at the pic...
    good work, mr. N.!!!
    :D :D :D

    ah, and i would love to see the colour version, mister! -;)
     
  5. Digital Matt

    Digital Matt alter ego: Analog Matt

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    I love the last one, although I think it would benefit from a slight rotate counter-clockwise.
     

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