b&w tips?

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  1. Ockie

    Ockie TPF Noob!

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    Just wondering how I could improve this image...

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    It was taken without flash with a 70-200mm at 122mm f2,8 1/125 at ISO 1600
     
  2. Sw1tchFX

    Sw1tchFX TPF Noob!

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    It's out of focus and blown out. You can't fix that.

    reshooting is the only solution if you want that shot, and i doubt you'd be able to do that.
     
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    Garbz No longer a newbie, moving up!

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    I don't mind the fact that it's blown. I personally do not find it the great evil people claim it to be, but I agree the out of focus is a bit annoying since the eye has nothing to really focus on.
     
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    The_Traveler Completely Counter-dependent Supporting Member

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    I would take out the one rain streak in the man's face. It looks like a scratch.
     
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    Out of focus, blown out, and the head thing sticking into the bottom of the frame really bugs me. Watch comp next time.
     

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