Baby Liz!

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  1. twocolor

    twocolor No longer a newbie, moving up!

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    Here's baby liz! 6months old also!

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  2. LaFoto

    LaFoto Just Corinna in real life Staff Member Supporting Member

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    This bow is a lot nicer than the one stuck to Abby's head.

    The second looks nice - can babies really sleep sitting in a chair like that? Seems like I forgot...

    Her expression is funny in the last, though as a mother I'm not sure I'd be really-really fond of that photo. But it's good for a giggle!

    With regards to the more professional aspects of this studio shooting you must wait for the really knowledgeable members to come round and comment. I know next to nothing about studio work, studio lighting etc., though at first sight it just looks good to me.
     
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    #1 I would have loved to see her eyes more.
    #2 Cute, but a little awkward. Is she asleep? If so I would love her in more of a reclined position. It makes me feel like she is uncomfortable. If she were more slanted, maybe cuddling with the bear the picture would make more sense.
    #3 is my favorite although I would prefer her face moved more to the left.
    #4 cute and a great idea. If I could be nit-picky I would put a little more room above her head and move the duck to the right, out of the center.

    Nice job with these. I'm sure mom just giggled and loves them.
     
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    3 is my favorite. The rest look a bit awkward as mentioned before.
     
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    Ahhh.... there it is in number 3! Some nice, directional lighting.

    Did you consider removing the secondary (smaller) catch lights?

    -Pete
     
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    #4 makes me crack up - it is like a stare off :) What a sweetie, she looks quite comfortable infront of you!

    I agree with some of the previous comments, I find that 1 is cropped too close for my taste and her skin tones picked up a lot of the pink from the blanket - might want to try to reduce that. The second one has very nice lighting however in a pose like this I think they need to be awake/have their eyes open. Three is great, I wish she was looking at you but I like it :)
     
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    At first glance of the "sleeping" photo, I ABSOLUTELY loved it. I just thought it was toooo precious!!
    but then after looking closer, it seems like her hand and foot might be moving? like maybe you just caught her mid-blink or something? which then makes it kinda an awkward pic.
    what a doll though!
     

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