Baby Photo's

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  1. throughmylense

    throughmylense TPF Noob!

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    Any suggestions on these baby shots? www.hawkinsphotography.com.au

    Really keen for some feedback. :)

    EDITED: Thought I might include some info on the shots:
    EDITED: Removed 2 pics off this, so please focus on the one left!!!

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  2. Rob

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    Hello Lyndon, me again.

    1) There's a lot of white space in the picture isn't there? Ok it's deliberate, but does it help? Also I don't like parts of the body chopped off.

    2) Fingers? Chopped off.

    3) Light's good, but it's a bit distracting having so much blur in the foreground, I'd be tempted to crop a good amount of it out. Also he's not looking very happy!

    They're only ideas - take em or leave em.

    Rob
     
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    throughmylens - for critiquing purposes please submit one photo at a time. you have three nice images for consideration and i want you to receive proper feedback for each. viewers tend to skip over posts with multiple images. you may go back and edit out two or i you'd like, i can do it for you. Jon
     
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    Hey,


    Thanks again for the replies and yes, I will edit out 2 of the pics for this thread!

    Rob - Pic number one was a 1000 x 600mm canvas print, which was the purpose for the white. Baby off centre is a BIG phase going through Sydney right now - people are pretty keen for it. I understand, from an image point of view, looks a bit strange!!

    2. Yes, the fingers... HOW DID I MISS THE FINGERS!!! ha ha ha

    3. Crop noted - will give it a try. She (I know, looks a bit like a boy from the pic) was very tired and fell asleep about 5 mins later!!!

    Thanks again.

    Lyndon.
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