Back to my roots (possible NWS self port)

Discussion in 'People Photography' started by MyaLover, Sep 8, 2008.

  1. MyaLover

    MyaLover TPF Noob!

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    My latest.... Im on the fence on this one. C&C always appreciated:


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  2. tirediron

    tirediron Watch the Birdy! Staff Member Supporting Member

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    I like everything except the way your left arm looks; for some reason it looks out of proportion.. great work however. You've got an amazing talent for this sort of thing.
     
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    MyaLover TPF Noob!

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    Thank you! And yes hahahahaha i didnt notice but it does look like i have a little baby arm!
     
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    Your not even near a fence in this image:lmao:

    I like it, with the exception of that left arm and the light line around the neck
     
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    Not totally digging the facial expression. I know you're going for high contrast, but I think a little more highlight detail would go a long way.
     
  6. yamadak13

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    I love your hair, gorgeous. I like the pic, but I think it is a little too soft around your left leg. I know you want it that way a little, but I just don't think there is enough definition there. Very beautiful though.
     
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    Thank you!
     
  8. Big Mike

    Big Mike I am Big, I am Mike Staff Member Supporting Member

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    I like the composition, but the crop feels a little too tight.
     
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    Very cool concept. I'm also confused by how your left arm turned out that way. Are you laying on a black blanket? It seems like maybe the blanket is covering edges of you here and there and giving a weird sort of allusion.
     
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    I think it is the angle.. and then rotating it made it look odd.... Since you pointed it out, its all I can stare at. Ill post new ones
     

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