Just like the title says I'm going back to the drawing board. Some areas I have been having problems with have been brought to my attention quite a bit more tonight. So I am in need of some serious critiques. This is the first one up for debate. Other than the ugly sky, does this work? It may be pertinent to add that these facts were brought to my attention by a member of my wifes family (who will remain un-named here). I assure you though that he is in the very upper circles of the worlds freelance photojournalists. In other words, all of my pics lack people and or "that's been done so much already". I respect his opinion very much and would also like yours! Please help, this is something I want to fix/improve on badly.