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Discussion in 'The Black & White Gallery' started by Harmony, Jan 1, 2009.

  1. Harmony

    Harmony TPF Noob!

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    I like this a lot. Good placement of logo and everything (at this size anyway) is tack sharp. I just think there is too much red in the photograph. I would also get rid of the pizza sign.

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    As suggested, although the red has remained. I'll play with that a bit.

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    dont forget about the reflection of the word pizza in the window... good picture thou!
     
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    I like the photo better WITH the pizza-sign, as it is all straight, not clipped off by the frame, and looks quite deliberately included, playing with its reflection in the window some, too.
    I find the red a bit on the strong side, too, at first I wondered "Where am I? 'Black&White Forum?'", but I like the grain/noise (it is noise, I know). Was it added? To make it more ... "urban"?
     
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    Thanks for the comment, LaFoto! Here's the version that's not so red, pizza sign still gone.

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    Personally, I prefer the pizza sign. It was very deliberate, and I cropped the photo so that it was included. The noise was not added... this was taken handheld from a car through a window at 1/30, so I needed the ISO 640. I am either VERY lucky, or VERY good :)lol: I think it's the first one!)
     
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    Im for the pizza sign and the not so red one as well, nice photo. -Danny
     
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    i think the original is the best of the three.
     
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    To each their own. I like the picture and appreciate you adjusting it so we could see for ourselves what it would look like with changes. Thanks for taking the time!

    And I don't think it was mostly luck, maybe just 10% luck, the rest was all you!

    -Nick
     
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    :hug:: Awww! That made me feel all fuzzy inside!
     

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