Discussion in 'Critique Forum Archives' started by P Bailey, Sep 22, 2004.
Very cool shot. Perfect for b & w. My only suggestion would be to crop closer, maybe removing the foot or so of wall on the leftside.
I agree, very interesting composition. I also agree about losing that section of wall on camera-left. I love the bright clean white door in the midst of all that grime and grey.
Maybe it's just me but think a little bit of noise would really add something to this.
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