Balloon Shop Critique Wanted

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  1. tron

    tron TPF Noob!

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    Hey

    Took these today, im not that happy with them but i figured uploading and getting feedback is better than scrapping the pictures.

    Anyways id really like some feedback on these pics. The ones done in hdr are labelled accordingly. And if youre just going to tell me theres too many pictures to critique, you can a. gtfo this thread or b. pick a few to crit. I hope those people pick the latter.

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    katanapilot TPF Noob!

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    I love the theme
     
  3. brandonb5269

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    love number 2 and number 7.

    i rly like the window frame in 1 but i think if the bookshelf was taken out it would lok better, but its a great pic.

    #5 is sweet i like shadow the pillar is casting and the angle
    ill post up more tomarow when im ot half asleep
     
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    6 and 9 work for me, nice job
     
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    i like 7, its good. i like the idea in 9 but i think it would have been better without the shelf in the side and maybe a little closer up to the window. im still a noob just my opinions
     
  6. tron

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    hey thanks for the comments everyone, dont be afraid to tear these apart :thumbup:

    in regards to the window with the shelf, i figured it would be too similar with so many 'window' pics, i thought the shelf gave a nice break to the cliched 'window' picture. just me though.

    but yeah thanks for the comments/critiques, keep em coming
     
  7. tron

    tron TPF Noob!

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    new pic up (pic 10)

    not complaining about my gear at all or making excuses, but has anyone else seen some barrel distortion at 18mm on the kit lens?

    i had to use the warp function to fix the barrel distortion in the last pic
     
  8. tron

    tron TPF Noob!

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    anyone?
     
  9. tron

    tron TPF Noob!

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    wow 117 views and 7 replies, with multiple replies being mine. im getting more comments on a website with fewer than 1000 members...
     
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    asseenonfuturama TPF Noob!

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    2 3 9
    2 has a weird shadow on the left
    good otherwise but mysterious shadow is distracting

    3 i almost feel like the pillar should be more in focus

    9 is great with the hdr effect but i think that it would also be good to either just have the window no bookshelf or more than just bookshelf..like surrounding stuff with window still in the center

    ya know i got mad love for you and your camera *** lol
     
  11. tron

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    new pics up (11, redited 6)
     
  12. manaheim

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    Too many to comment on, but really... I like a lot of them.
     

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