barbed wire redux

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  1. Allsmiles7282

    Allsmiles7282 TPF Noob!

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    I took what everyone suggested into consideration, unfortunately, when I got closer to the wire, I had to sacrifice too much DOF and you can't see that it says "Jesus Saves" on the shack. Oh well...I tried and thats all you can do! Thanks for the advice though!! =)

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    Well IMO, I like this better asthetically. You do lose the sign and symbolism, but I like it.
     
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    Likewise. As much as I liked the version with the sign, I love the contrast and tone in this. The grain really adds something as well. Great second attempt!
     
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    Personally i liked the one with the text. This is great asthetically, but it doesn't say much to me.
     

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